SunnyRays's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Port City]

So totally awesome

first of all I'm gonna set you as one of my role models^^

but like I said before on another review, you have a real way with colors and small details...whether it be landscape, people, clothing, you make it seem so lively and the lighting effects is just as awesome, also you're great at drawing fabric...I mean it doesn't really show that much on this particular drawing but overall...

anyways fantastic work, hope to see more :D

AlvinHew responds:

Thanks so much, Ray! You're going to art school right? Well keep it up, you've got loads of talent.

[enlightenment]

well ok

um certainly a lot of room for expansion of skills and stuff
just a few things I wanna point out:
-the overall shading was pretty decent
-you may want to define your lines a bit more
(however that actually doesn't hold in the long run since well real people don't really have outlines now do they?...but that depends really on what you wanna achieve)
-anyways back on topic, the eyes and brow seem just a tiny bit too high
-lips were done quiet well, but like before you may want to better define most of the features
-also the neck seems a bit thick (although the shape is right)
-and well shoulder needs to be somewhat wider
-finally the frame of the head and face(eyes, nose, mouth...) are a bit off
<perhaps rotate the "face" 5 degrees counterclockwise>

-hope this helps

ehix responds:

thanks , every suggestion is helpful :)

[Bloody Samus]

grr she looks angry

its good, and would be cooler if you made a full body with enemies surrounding^^

but obviously thats more work so just something to keep in mind for the future

colors were nicely done

Imaru responds:

thanks, i'll keep that on mind, that's why i'm new with the digital board n_nU

[USB]

thats very detailed

the wood texture looks realistic to the extreme

Little-Bacchus responds:

Thank you :) I just thought it would how it off well.